Odemakin Taiwo Hassan Entry6 Flawless


Name that mantra many live by,
To some, it's just one of life doors,
Fears abound, tears around, flying floors.
That's the cloud their birds fly.


Throwing thick thoughts through thorns,
A resolution, in every way.
Finding reasons, opportunities to always slay,
Taking each and every bull by their horns.

Flawless, it's more than just a word,
Many try, some live, others survive,
A pouting path even after five,
Flawless, a whole new world.

Odemakin Taiwo Hassan.

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  1. Hassan,forever an unmatched genius!!!

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  2. Flawless poet
    My bro
    Keep hoisting the flag of excellence

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  3. Ouch!!! This is great thoughts
    More inks to ur pens bro

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  4. Inspiring!
    MashaAllah bro
    More power to your elbow or pen in this case☺️

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  5. This is such a good work Hassan.
    More ink to your pen.

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  6. Hello poetry pal...your words are always refreshing like ice water on a hot day(Elsa)❣️

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  7. Taiwo i so love your poems.
    May God's wisdom keep increasing in you

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  8. Beautiful and brilliant. Well done brother

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  9. This is beautiful. Thank you. 🌺

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  10. Great write up. Never going to dissapoint me. Keep the ink flowing bro...

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  11. Now here is something to sit and Muse on. Flawless ..

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  12. Nice write up bro.....

    Forever crush

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  13. This is absolutely thought provoking!

    I love the style, especially the stellar use of alliterations in some of its lines.

    Keep on feeding us with excellence.

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  14. excellently dispatched, bard. don't stop doing what you do best.

    earnestly, 'Joba.

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  15. savoury and succinct. go win this champ!

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  16. This is thought provoking. Hassan! You're a great Wright!

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  17. Wow! Short and powerful lines...
    Deep imagery
    And nice choice of words.
    Your FOS is Awesome.

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  18. Wow... I really love this piece
    Go for the best Darling

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  19. Wow... I really love this piece
    Go for the best Darling

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  20. Wow... I really love this piece
    Go for the best Darling

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  21. Nice one Hassan Taiwo.
    Keep giving us the best.

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  22. Painstakingly and wonderfully written.

    Simply the best young poet I've ever met.

    Keep it up bro.

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  23. just brilliant...absolutely brilliant

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  24. Your piece are always intriguing. Keep it up bro

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  25. Keep it up my dear, the sky is ur starting point

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  26. Weldone Odemakin Taiwo! Beautiful poem. I so much love ur use of words!

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  27. HasssannπŸš€πŸš€πŸš€

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  28. Excellent brother... keep on pushing

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  29. This is actually a beautiful piece

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  30. Salute to Odemakin's writing prowess and dexterity

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  31. I guess there is a reason your piece came first, they didn't want to dissapoint

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  32. I always knew right from the beginning that you're great writer

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  33. This is awesome, dear.
    Those intriguing words combination and rhymes are WOW.

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  34. I nominate you. You are really good.

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  35. Hassan, I'm impressed, keep soaring bro, this is but the beginning.

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