Odemakin Taiwo Hassan Entry6 Flawless
Name that mantra many live by,
To some, it's just one of life doors,
Fears abound, tears around, flying floors.
That's the cloud their birds fly.
Throwing thick thoughts through thorns,
A resolution, in every way.
Finding reasons, opportunities to always slay,
Taking each and every bull by their horns.
Flawless, it's more than just a word,
Many try, some live, others survive,
A pouting path even after five,
Flawless, a whole new world.
Odemakin Taiwo Hassan.
Hassan,forever an unmatched genius!!!
ReplyDeleteFlawless poet
ReplyDeleteMy bro
Keep hoisting the flag of excellence
Ouch!!! This is great thoughts
ReplyDeleteMore inks to ur pens bro
Soulful
ReplyDeleteInspiring!
ReplyDeleteMashaAllah bro
More power to your elbow or pen in this case☺️
This is such a good work Hassan.
ReplyDeleteMore ink to your pen.
Hello poetry pal...your words are always refreshing like ice water on a hot day(Elsa)❣️
ReplyDeleteSuperb
ReplyDeleteRespect to you always
ReplyDeleteTaiwo i so love your poems.
ReplyDeleteMay God's wisdom keep increasing in you
Super hero
ReplyDeleteNice one keep it up
Awesome π―
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and brilliant. Well done brother
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. Thank you. πΊ
ReplyDeleteGreat write up. Never going to dissapoint me. Keep the ink flowing bro...
ReplyDeleteNow here is something to sit and Muse on. Flawless ..
ReplyDeleteNice piece
ReplyDeleteNice write up love
ReplyDeleteThe masterpiece!
ReplyDeleteNice write up hassium
ReplyDeleteNice write up bro.....
ReplyDeleteForever crush
This is absolutely thought provoking!
ReplyDeleteI love the style, especially the stellar use of alliterations in some of its lines.
Keep on feeding us with excellence.
excellently dispatched, bard. don't stop doing what you do best.
ReplyDeleteearnestly, 'Joba.
savoury and succinct. go win this champ!
ReplyDeleteThis is thought provoking. Hassan! You're a great Wright!
ReplyDeleteGo for gold dearie...
ReplyDeleteNice
ReplyDeleteHassanπ
ReplyDeleteWow! Short and powerful lines...
ReplyDeleteDeep imagery
And nice choice of words.
Your FOS is Awesome.
A lovely piece of art.
ReplyDeleteWow... I really love this piece
ReplyDeleteGo for the best Darling
Wow... I really love this piece
ReplyDeleteGo for the best Darling
Wow... I really love this piece
ReplyDeleteGo for the best Darling
Nice one Hassan Taiwo.
ReplyDeleteKeep giving us the best.
Painstakingly and wonderfully written.
ReplyDeleteSimply the best young poet I've ever met.
Keep it up bro.
just brilliant...absolutely brilliant
ReplyDeleteNice one bro....
ReplyDeletethis is Sooo cool
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written!
ReplyDeleteYour piece are always intriguing. Keep it up bro
ReplyDeleteBravoπ€...Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteKeep it up my dear, the sky is ur starting point
ReplyDeleteNice one bro
ReplyDeleteKeep it up
Wow!
ReplyDeleteThese words are fluid.❤
Weldone Odemakin Taiwo! Beautiful poem. I so much love ur use of words!
ReplyDeleteAmazing
ReplyDeleteFlawless indeed
ReplyDeleteHasssannπππ
ReplyDeleteExcellent brother... keep on pushing
ReplyDeleteBrillante
ReplyDeleteπππ
ReplyDeleteTerse.
ReplyDeleteTerse.
ReplyDeleteConcise
ReplyDeleteConcise
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful
ReplyDeleteWowwwwww
ReplyDeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteThis is actually a beautiful piece
ReplyDeleteSalute to Odemakin's writing prowess and dexterity
ReplyDeleteI guess there is a reason your piece came first, they didn't want to dissapoint
ReplyDeleteNice one bro ✊ ✊
ReplyDeleteI always knew right from the beginning that you're great writer
ReplyDeleteSpectacular!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant! Well done
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly done.
ReplyDeleteWelldone brother
This is awesome, dear.
ReplyDeleteThose intriguing words combination and rhymes are WOW.
I love this!, well done
ReplyDeleteEntirely fascinating. π
ReplyDeleteI nominate you. You are really good.
ReplyDeleteHassan, I'm impressed, keep soaring bro, this is but the beginning.
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