Heritage Ayomibodunde Entry 19 Flawless

FLAWLESS
Drums of the dark, the ancient black
A golden pole,endlessly perfect
Our story, story of the spark
On every lips with no single defect

Our aborigine made a knack
Tricks that evoke the ones elect;
Our gods, we served without a crack
Faultless! Impeccable! Our culture was our flack

Our kings wear the crown, your calpack
A symbol for everyone to respect
If I have the power to buy back
Then I will go for my African intellect.

Comments

  1. Absolutely beautiful!
    "If have the power to buy back, then I'll go for my African intellect"

    What if I fall out of that spark and attain a crack,
    Surely I'll find even a zap to put me back on track,
    And with joy again I'll wear the African cap.

    Keep the pen bleeding sir!

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  2. Lovely poem,most especially d last two lines...weldone Sis

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  3. Perfectly composed.. Ride on, I love this.. Beautiful poem.

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  4. This got me. Actually read through thrice; every read is as captivating as the former.

    Nice work.

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  5. African, home of the best.
    Our culture, culture of the best.
    No man's property can be as good as ours.
    No man's culture can over power ours.
    I live Africa

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  6. So sensible.. Waiting to read more from you.... Can't stop reading this over again.

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  7. Wow! This Is A Lovely One. I Was Glued To The Phone's Screen Till I Finished Reading. More Oil To You Ink.

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  8. This is an impeccable piece....
    Beautifully articulating the African Intellects. I must commend your thoughts......

    A call back to the African Intellectual...

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  9. This is lovely and impacting dear.
    Ride on

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  10. Thoughtful piece. African intellect.

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  11. Wow. This is interesting. Nice write up Heritage

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  12. I know you can do this. Nice write up ma

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  13. Hmmmm, is captivating. It brings back our pride as afrikans, a sense of humour to our heritage.
    Great writeup, never drop the pen dear.

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  14. This should be displayed in every Premier league match as it is starts its #NO RACISM campaign.
    AFRICA MY PRIDE.
    #Awesome poem

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  15. Rhyme scheme on point sis... I love this!!! Go and prosper...

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  16. This is so beautiful and educative

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