Heritage Ayomibodunde Entry 19 Flawless
FLAWLESS
Drums of the dark, the ancient black
A golden pole,endlessly perfect
Our story, story of the spark
On every lips with no single defect
Our aborigine made a knack
Tricks that evoke the ones elect;
Our gods, we served without a crack
Faultless! Impeccable! Our culture was our flack
Our kings wear the crown, your calpack
A symbol for everyone to respect
If I have the power to buy back
Then I will go for my African intellect.
Wow...I love this
ReplyDeleteNice✌👍👍
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful!
ReplyDelete"If have the power to buy back, then I'll go for my African intellect"
What if I fall out of that spark and attain a crack,
Surely I'll find even a zap to put me back on track,
And with joy again I'll wear the African cap.
Keep the pen bleeding sir!
Thank you.
DeleteLovely poem,most especially d last two lines...weldone Sis
ReplyDeleteNice😙😙
ReplyDeletePerfectly composed.. Ride on, I love this.. Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful😗
ReplyDeleteNice one
ReplyDeleteThis got me. Actually read through thrice; every read is as captivating as the former.
ReplyDeleteNice work.
Thank you Temitope
DeleteAfrican, home of the best.
ReplyDeleteOur culture, culture of the best.
No man's property can be as good as ours.
No man's culture can over power ours.
I live Africa
So sensible.. Waiting to read more from you.... Can't stop reading this over again.
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteLovely write up
ReplyDeleteGood
ReplyDeleteWell crafted.
ReplyDeleteNice peom
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and inspired.
ReplyDeleteWow! This Is A Lovely One. I Was Glued To The Phone's Screen Till I Finished Reading. More Oil To You Ink.
ReplyDeleteThis is an impeccable piece....
ReplyDeleteBeautifully articulating the African Intellects. I must commend your thoughts......
A call back to the African Intellectual...
This is lovely and impacting dear.
ReplyDeleteRide on
Nice
ReplyDeleteThis is so so great....
ReplyDeleteAwesome read
ReplyDeleteYou are wonderful... keep it up
ReplyDeleteNice write up
ReplyDeleteVery inspiring...
ReplyDeleteMore wisdom dear...so inspiring
ReplyDeleteNice write up
ReplyDeleteGud to go dear. Nice write up
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Well done.
ReplyDeleteCool
ReplyDeleteNice one
ReplyDeleteThoughtful piece. African intellect.
ReplyDeleteWow. This is interesting. Nice write up Heritage
ReplyDeleteI know you can do this. Nice write up ma
ReplyDeleteHmmmm, is captivating. It brings back our pride as afrikans, a sense of humour to our heritage.
ReplyDeleteGreat writeup, never drop the pen dear.
This should be displayed in every Premier league match as it is starts its #NO RACISM campaign.
ReplyDeleteAFRICA MY PRIDE.
#Awesome poem
Really Love this. So educative
ReplyDeleteRhyme scheme on point sis... I love this!!! Go and prosper...
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful and educative
ReplyDeleteNice piece
ReplyDeleteThis is fantastic
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