Isreal Eze Jacob Entry 8 Flawless
Flawless
I am the pathless reflection
with goddess crush,
flawlessly in damsel's vision
as the wind cruising rush.
The flowers waving praise
in the early spring
adores my elegant raise
as the countless birds sing.
My majestic brightness
catches ocean's eyes
with rapt swiftness
to my classy guise.
Israel Eze Jacob
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U are indeed flawless...
More ink to your pen dear