Flawless
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FLAWLESS
BY Alamu Mary Adedoyin
My sunflower, perfect one with no flaws
Warm and inviting as the summer morn
Your sight the sun of my heart tracks
I'm sick and lovelorn
The healing you give stands the test of times
Your royalty those brilliant yellow petals adorn
You were to me but tiny among seeds
Till your popularity ruled out the doubt born
Your heart too, bright and cheery with bliss
My soul is weak to behold your heart torn
To be your strong taproot my desire is
To break through your hard soil of troubles born
To provide a much needed assistance
All for my impeccable jewel's reborn.
Nice panoply of words.Weldone
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MKO.....
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